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Chris Wong Sick Hong
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- Spokane, WA
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I can hear that--along the lines of sound first, literal meaning second.
If that's what you wanted, far be it for me to suggest otherwise :-) (I guess the tension I mentioned was intentional)
"mere endurance will not suffice" -- nice
I'm not sure how to feel about the piling on of adjectives. They go against what I've been taught, but they do keep the piece from falling into monorhythm. The extra shades of meaning may not be necessary--…
I love this piece, man!
It has flow, it is in the know
and it reminds me of my ex-girlfriend that
I can't so much as call anymore even though
she keeps creeping up behind me metaphorically
in my dreams somehow, or nightmares, depending.
I see some…
hmm...
Nestled in the common green,
when harlequins stumble across
such a fractured visage
still staring resolutely beyond,
they kneel down, gratified, and remark,
"See? Even we are gods."
I like your images. Staring resolutely beyond, in the midst of inevitable decay...great observation. The ending is unclear. I like the ambiguity of it, but it is still reaching for the same detail and observation that you bring to the rest of the po…
Happy to read. A very good piece of poem with nicely crafted words and with a content that deserves attention. Thank you very much.
Oh, and I wanted to say that I think the choice of a wry/sarcastic tone is a good one. The dissonance between the narrative voice and the content is probably the lion's share of the immediate, emotional effect. Cool.
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- Type of Writer or Editor
- Freelance
- About Me:
- I'm looking for freelance writing opportunities. I have a B.A. in English and have taught English Composition as a graduate teaching assistant. In addition to writing, my strengths include martial arts, games, and spirituality.
Credits
"Peace Despite Danger: A Martial Arts Perspective" accepted by SoulAim.org
Webmaster, Willow Springs (http://willowsprings.ewu.edu)
Content Writing Credit for Unification Wars, an online game
"Practical Divination: Tips and Tricks for GMs" in Pyramid, SJ Games' e-zine
Interests
3rd-degree black belt, SDS Aikijitsu
Amateur game designer
6 years of personal meditative and spiritual study
- Website:
- http://www.chriswsh.com
Comment Wall (2 comments)
- At 4:49am on January 15, 2009,
Jennifer Helen said…
- I just came across your profile in this network. I would like to extend an invitation to join Allvoices.com. It’s a citizen journalist site. We discuss, debate and write about everything under the sun here. Allvoices also has an incentive program for writers and they can earn up to $10,000 cash. Register at http://www.allvoices.com/journalism and start contributing.
- At 12:30pm on July 24, 2008,
David Eide said… Hi Chris,
Welcome to Sunoasis Writers Network! Make yourself at home and have some fun.
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