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Pouring over this listless
Chamber

Slave to ways distincly
Distanced
And savored with a flavor
Awash
With misplaced
Cravings
Cradling an amazing
Adventure
What is meant by her
Nature
Is Fate turned
Cold
Sold for the pouring forth
Not over
Hovering over
Or recovering
From lust torn asunder

Mistaken for nothing but
What it was
Glows with a candor
And not much else
This world her mind
Created to finally find
A place where she would
Feel
And steal the fine silver slivers
Shivering inside
His or her soul

Should
At least
Win right there
Where
Swearing
It is pleasure
To fritter and waste
A measure of attraction
For four forward thinking
Moments or so
To never
Again find

Together

Those moments grown old
And knowing

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Josh S
I have been privileged with going through a nice experience. This is a very good piece, indeed. You have wonderful mastery over words and emotions. Methinks this is my poem, a poem which I could/should have written some day.
Thank you, dear friend..
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Josh,

I relished the ride, well written in its flow; the gravity and despair of loss. My wish, especially as a female reading the piece, is that the emotional aspect would be more defined or embraced. Draw me into the warmth and shake me with the cold realization. Make me hope, then steal it from me. We all can relate. Intensity born yet slain before it fully ripens.

Anxious to read more.

Best wishes for a glorious new year,
Patricia

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